Tuesday, 14 July 2020

Why are bees important to our planet?


Why are bees important to our Planet?

Why are bees so important to Earth? And why are they dying? Essentially, bees are Earth's number one pollinators. They work hard every single day to make their sweet delectable honey just to be taken from them to be eaten by us.


Furthermore, Bees are important to us because they pollinate all the time. Worker honey bees make 1/12 teaspoon of honey and normal bees make 6144 teaspoons of it.


In the year twenty nineteen, there were two trillion bees and over a year later, they have dropped down to the population of two billion!


People conclude that they are dying because of global warming, habitat destroyal, parasites, and many more disasters that could have caused this big population drop. Bees could be going extinct in 13 years. That's in the year 2033. If you're ten, you’d be 23!


You might think that you can’t save bees because you’re allergic to them and can’t touch them. In fact, there are many ways to save bees from extinction without touching them. You can make a bee garden, or do something that doesn’t need much work like, growing a tree or some flowers.

It’s really that simple! Bees are going extinct from even diseases that come from fungi, bacteria and one disease that makes bees' wings be damaged. So watch out for what location you're keeping your bees.


Lastly, Without bees, apples, pears, melons, nashi fruit and much more would vanish from super markets and people wouldn’t have much to eat. So you must help the bee population rise. Many people are allergic to bees and can get into serious conditions. But bees are just trying to protect them and their family from us.


To wrap it all up, bees are one of the best insects on the planet that helps humans make crops grow. We should all strive to do our best to keep bees alive and give them the best home we can. You must help the bee population emerge from extinction and not to be an extinct species forever on earth.


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I have used my first technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my second technique to enhance my writing

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I have used my third technique to enhance my writing

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Use at least three different (FEARRR) persuasive techniques in your writing.

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Active Reflection: 

My Reflection



What have I done well?



I have used lots of facts and opinions in my writing.



Next step:



I am going to get better at adding more rhetorical questions into my writing.




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