Swimming Lessons (Story)

Today i was learning how to write a story better.

I really enjoyed writing this story.

Maybe next time i could change the adjectives i used.

Swimming Sports Recount

WALHT: identify features of a type of writing	Success Criteria  🌝 🌝 🌝
I can find proper nouns that name things	2/3
I can find interesting adjectives	3/3
I can find powerful verbs	3/3
I can find adverbs	3/3
I can find similes	2/3

WALHT: use THE BEST adjectives.	Success Criteria  🌝 🌝 🌝
I can find examples of the senses	2/3
I can find ‘simple’ adjectives.	3/3
I can find interesting adjectives	3/3

 Swimming Lessons

Walking into the Enterprise swimming pools I could smell the cold water brimmed with chlorine. I hopped.

 My swimming partner Mason took a grip of the smooth swimming board as I placed my hands firmly onto mine.
I accelerated my delicate body as I splashed my arms and legs in and out of the teal water. Splash, splash, splash.
“Onto my second length” I whispered to myself.

Splash! I paddled my straight legs and arms like a wave. Passing through, Mason catched up paddling vigorously, slowing down and getting tired as I went ahead  trying to use the smallest of my stamina. “Now you and Mason need to hold your breath underwater” the swimming teacher explained. I dived down into the deep, cold water. I closed my eyes hoping I could last enough in the deep blues of the pools.

Poof! The water splashed into the air with bubbles bouncing back into the water. “I think I improved.” I said. “I think we both did” Mason replied as i pushed myself out of the cold water.